You've really improved your blog Laura - well done! You have shown comprehensive planning and preparation. The use of try outs is effective as is your commentary explaining how you plan to use them. There is a clear sense of good organisation for the shoot in terms of mise-en-scene. Your R+P is a good level 3 here: to develop it: - try to incorporate more technical terms in your analysis - produce a more detailed storyboard - yours is ok but a bit general - try to show the range of shots that you will use - think about how you can plan for artistic / interesting shots and a variety of shots - can you think of ideas for interesting close ups? - when justifying mise-en-scene choices (especially actors and costume choices) try to link them to ideas about representation - how do they fit what is expected in your mucial genre? What messages does this create about the performers?
You've really improved your blog Laura - well done! You have shown comprehensive planning and preparation. The use of try outs is effective as is your commentary explaining how you plan to use them. There is a clear sense of good organisation for the shoot in terms of mise-en-scene. Your R+P is a good level 3 here: to develop it:
ReplyDelete- try to incorporate more technical terms in your analysis
- produce a more detailed storyboard - yours is ok but a bit general - try to show the range of shots that you will use - think about how you can plan for artistic / interesting shots and a variety of shots - can you think of ideas for interesting close ups?
- when justifying mise-en-scene choices (especially actors and costume choices) try to link them to ideas about representation - how do they fit what is expected in your mucial genre? What messages does this create about the performers?